【明報專訊】” ONE afternoon, I came across a robbery. I was chatting with a security guard when the robbers came into our jewellery shop. They were looking at the jewellery when they came in. I was scared.
Suddenly, one of the robbers pointed his gun at me. I tried to press the alarm. I felt very nervous. So when other people were running out of the jewellery shop, I pressed the alarm again.
“Ring! Ring! Ring!”the alarm went off. The customers and I screamed. One of the robbers fired his gun when we were screaming. We ducked down. The other robber smashed the display cabinet and put the jewellery into their bags. I felt very frightened.
At this moment, the police arrived. The robbers wanted to get away. The police fired their guns when the robbers were escaping. Other people and I ran out of the jewellery shop shouting “Help!”
Finally, the police caught the robbers. I felt relieved. ”
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．Won Ka Fai Elvis
．Precious Blood Primary School (Wah Fu Estate) 6C
■Comment：
Good work, Elvis! I definitely felt the tension while reading your story.
[Smarties' Power English 第272期]
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