【明報專訊】學生姓名:Wong Ho Man 鴨c洲街坊學校(投稿時二年級)(圖一) The City I like most This is our city. There is a cake shop. It is near a swimming pool. We can find a bus stop in front of the cake shop. 學生姓名:文立仁 香港培道小學(投稿時二年級)(圖二) ■短評 今期刊登兩名二年級同學的投稿,一中一英。一廂寫實描述自己所在城市的一處,用字直白;另一廂寫意般描繪鳥兒,筆觸相當熟練呢。想一想,鳥兒在這城市隨處可見,但有多少人停下欣賞過,甚至為牠作一幅畫呢?
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