Readers' corner:A robbery

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【明報專訊】” ONE afternoon, I came across a robbery. I was chatting with a security guard when the robbers came into our jewellery shop. They were looking at the jewellery when they came in. I was scared.

Suddenly, one of the robbers pointed his gun at me. I tried to press the alarm. I felt very nervous. So when other people were running out of the jewellery shop, I pressed the alarm again.

“Ring! Ring! Ring!”the alarm went off. The customers and I screamed. One of the robbers fired his gun when we were screaming. We ducked down. The other robber smashed the display cabinet and put the jewellery into their bags. I felt very frightened.

At this moment, the police arrived. The robbers wanted to get away. The police fired their guns when the robbers were escaping. Other people and I ran out of the jewellery shop shouting “Help!”

Finally, the police caught the robbers. I felt relieved. ”

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.Won Ka Fai Elvis

.Precious Blood Primary School (Wah Fu Estate) 6C

■Comment:

Good work, Elvis! I definitely felt the tension while reading your story.

[Smarties' Power English 第272期]

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